Lucky

you're amazing

one of a kind

lovely in every way

people like you are hard to find

 

you're nice and caring

always put others before you

one of the many reasons

that the love I have for you is true

 

smart yet silly

in perfect balance

adds to a wonderful person

putting me in a trance

 

and wrap it up

inside all of that beauty

makes you perfect

a flawless cutie

 

any guy would be lucky to have you

and for me to be that guy

it truely makes me happy

for you a very painful death I'd die

Reviews

[schmevavikman]

this is indeed very confectionary,and endearing. however i have to agree,the green font is a bit of a headache :p

[alexis]

well written.whats with the color?

[donny ingraham]

well written

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well written, I did however have difficulty reading with it being in green, ( my eyes couldnt focus properly as I have some vision difficulties) But I enjoyed a lot.

[Day Dreamer]

That was wonderful. Very well written, everything about it was wonderful. Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

"any guy would be lucky to have you
and for me to be that guy
it truely makes me happy
for you a very painful death I'd die"

This was amazing, I loved it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Roxi L]

Interesting. I found the last stanza interesting.

"any guy would be lucky to have you
and for me to be that guy
it truely makes me happy
for you a very painful death I'd die"

that's what true love does to people.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~