part of me

we have something special

a connection between you and I

a link holding us together

our hearts close it does tie

 

forever will we be close

so close we can feel the others radiating heat

so close we can

hear the others heart beat

 

never will I let this link

be broken

for the love I contain

has spoken

 

this link connects us completely

mind, body,soul, and heart

I will do anything

to keep it from being tore apart

 

I get the feeling

we were meant to be

we are linked together

you are part of me

Author's Note

how was it?

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Something to which anyone can relate himself. This poem brings a promise in one`s mind, the promise to keep the meaning of love alive, a promise to b there olwyzzz for love for passion. A beautifull peace of writting
Fantastic
LOve it
Regards
PRODICAL

[alexis]

beautiful poem

[light and ashes]

A beautiful poem :] You express words of tenderness so sweetly and beautifully.

[Lee Gupperton]

I loved it! Good job, keep it up

[curvytheatergeek]

i loved it, it had a good flow and i like the way that you separated the stanzas.

[Becky C Strukamp]

It was lovely. Good flow, well written.

[Roxi L]

Beautiful. It flowed very nice. The feelings from this poem are overwhelming.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Day Dreamer]

It was wonderful, beautiful, and very well written. I loved it. Thanks for sending the readinf request, it was worth the reading. Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

It was beautiful. I liked the picture.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[donny ingraham]

Wonderfully written. This poem is deep with feelings