perfect life

perfect life

A Poem by Canicus

picture us on the beach

walking hand in hand

sitting with your head on my shoulder

and our toes in the sand

 

at home laying in bed

wrapping my arms around you

holding you close to me

staying up together until we hear the alarms

 

cuddling up on the couch

into each others eyes we stare

falling asleep together

me running my fingers through your hair

 

holding each other so close

we can feel the others heart beat

making it go faster

our lips will meet

 

a perfect life to me

this seems

one day it may not be

just some of my hopes and dreams

© 2011 Canicus


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A beautiful sincere write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful. This actually almost excally a scene from a book I read a few years ago. I loved it.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

Posted 13 Years Ago


You penned this very well it was beautiful. It could be a scene in a movie.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think you penned a most beautiful love poem and did a fantastic job. You captured love so well here. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is nice. It brings back memories for me. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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