perfect life

picture us on the beach

walking hand in hand

sitting with your head on my shoulder

and our toes in the sand

 

at home laying in bed

wrapping my arms around you

holding you close to me

staying up together until we hear the alarms

 

cuddling up on the couch

into each others eyes we stare

falling asleep together

me running my fingers through your hair

 

holding each other so close

we can feel the others heart beat

making it go faster

our lips will meet

 

a perfect life to me

this seems

one day it may not be

just some of my hopes and dreams

Author's Note

what do you think

Reviews

[Sarah]

emotioanal, you can picture every thing hapening.
XD

[alexis]

a very emotional piece.i would have added more imagery,but it is still good.

[Paul Devlin]

It's ok. I would add more imagery to this.

[Day Dreamer]

wow, that was a wonderful piece. :)

[Steph K]

This is a truly emotional piece. It is inspiring really and I was deeply moved as I went along. What is perfect? Simply reading a good piece of work ( in my opinion that is) Thank you for sharing this piece, it really made me think and reflect. My favourite line " We can feel the others heart beat" Beautiful.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Adorable. I absolutely loved it, and it was a great thing to read after being gone for a week and some days. :) Great work.

[light and ashes]

Beautiful :]

[Samantha Heaton]

This was Ah-mazing i absolutly loved it... These are actrully some of my dreams

[donny ingraham]

Hopes and dreams give us the drive to move forward within this world. Well written

[curvytheatergeek]

Very beautiful and sincere as well as being heartfelt.