everwinding road

everwinding road

A Poem by Canicus

take a drive with me
on this everwinding road
just me and you
enjoying the beautiful view

just us together
riding into the sunset
as we watch the world we know disappear
nothing can stop me as long you're near

driving on a road, neverending
having the time of my life
spending it with you
there's nothing I'd rather do

sure there are pot holes
and fallen trees in our way
butwe can get through anything together
and I'm willing to stay by your side forever

If the car breaks down
I will gladly walk with you hand in hand
as long as you're by my side
I'm stepping away and letting my heart be the guide

take a drive with me
on this everwinding road
the name of it is love
I will drive on it with my angel from above

© 2011 Canicus


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this is so sweet!

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is so adorable.I truly think that this is one of my favorites

Posted 13 Years Ago


I truly love this poem!
"take a drive with me
on this everwinding road
the name of it is love
I will drive on it with my angel above."




Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved the eventure you took, Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Like the journey in which you have taken, This is a wonderful write.
So very nicely written and shared.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent imagry. I'm crying again. I love this poem. I was reading this as my playlist started and "No Air" as preformed by the glee cast came on and it just fits.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it. excellent imagry here

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww I loved it!! I liked the road trip.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful. I like the way you use a car, road trip and the"pot holes" to describe a relationship and its ups and downs and difficulties. Excellent poem. You penned this well. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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