perfect

you have no flaws
not in my mind
sweet, beautiful,
caring, funny, and kind

when people say
if it sounds to good to be true
than it's all just pretend
they forgot about one thing... you

everything you do
is impressive
caring for others when no one else will
dealing with problems and not getting agressive

people say that
no human can reach perfection
I now know that's not true
you are the one exception

your amazing
and just plain lovely
that's why
you're perfect to me

Author's Note

how is this?

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Beautifully and so so sweet :]

[Steph K]

Perfection like beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Well penned!

[Solitary Dreamer]

It's so sweet. Any girl would be lucky to have a guy like you:)

[whispereversolightly]

Aww this is so sweet and sincere.

[+Naomi+]

D'Aww! This was adorable! I love your writing, it's all so loving xD

[Lee Gupperton]

It's.. Adorbale. You capture your emotions well. Good job.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Again, absolutely darling. :) I really love your poems, they're very loving.

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Awww so cute! This girl is very lucky!

[Tasha]

This was beautiful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Becky C Strukamp]

You penned this love poem beautifully.