crumbled

love poem based on earth

My love for you
like the earth is strong
and rich with thoughts of you
this love can't be wrong

erosion and weathering
try to tear us apart
but it's too late
you already have my heart

like the trees, and plants that flourish the earth
my love for you grows everyday
with everything you do
and every word you say

we can destroy anything in our way
just like an earthquake
crumble everything
if that is what it will take

but I can tell you one thing
if my heart were made of stone
it crumbled right in your hand
and now I'll never be alone

Author's Note

tell me what you think.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

A beautiful poem about the power of love :]

[Solitary Dreamer]

Love is... unpredictable, but you have captured its beauty:) Great write:)

[whispereversolightly]

love your third stanza, This is lovely ; )

[Tasha]

Its a great write about love and the earth.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Cassiopia Summers]

Awe, the last line just wraps up the poem so well. And you do write very lovely love poems.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You write very sweet love poems. Well done!

[+Naomi+]

I can tell you really love whoever this is about(:
Amazing job. I love how you based this on the earthxD

[ShadowOfTheDay]

This is really good! Keep up the good work! (: