disease and cure

It started in my heart
then it spread throughout
it's consuming me completely
I don't want it out

infecting me severely
poisoning my bloodstream
filling me with the illness
it's not as bad as it seems

there is one treatment
to cure this disease that lives in me
it will also build my tolerance
but the best things in life are not always free

I can get treated
or stay infected
either way I go
I will end up effected

she is the disease
effecting my train of thought
yet she is also the cure
getting rid of all the depression I've got

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Roxi L]

Really nice. Love, it is a disease and a cure. It really depends on which way you look at it. This explains both ways.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[<3Lil.Bit(:]

Wondeful. I like how this poem is deeper then what the average person would look for. Simple but it flows together nicely. I love your unique idea to compare someones love to a disease as well as a cure.

~Skulli

[About a girl*]

i thought this was good. a cute idea, and written well. i like how you string your words together. its simple. not too descriptive in a way that makes you have to think about what it means. anyyyway, again, nice poem. so keep going.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You penned this very well. I also think the way in which you developed this poem was quite good. Wonderful poem. I enjoyed it very much.

[light and ashes]

Nice poem. It is really sweet :] I enjoyed reading it.

[Tasha]

i liked it