Full speed ahead

Full speed ahead

A Poem by Canicus

Time
It's going way to fast
I can never
seem to make it last

It's happening
all too soon
I just want
to stay in my cocoon

This is
a lot to take on
and the picture
 is poorly drawn

Just got comfy
in my own
now moving
to a path not yet shown

I'm not ready
to go on un-led
but I guess
full speed ahead

© 2013 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
I'm getting back into it.
enjoy

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The rhyme flows realy well. It is very true and deep

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this and it speaks truth about time that's for sure, it's realistic and relatable too. Time does seem to go by really fast sometimes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Makes me think of how people are around the holidays. Like a million things to do but not enough time to do it. Great poem really well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


You either beat time or time beats you...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. Great flow with understandable feelings. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's simplistic, yet very elaborate. Wonderful job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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