Full speed ahead
A Poem by Canicus
TimeIt's going way to fast I can never seem to make it last
It's happening all too soon I just want to stay in my cocoon
This is a lot to take on and the picture is poorly drawn
Just got comfy in my own now moving to a path not yet shown
I'm not ready to go on un-led but I guess full speed ahead
© 2013 Canicus
Author's Note
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I'm getting back into it.
enjoy
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Reviews
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The rhyme flows realy well. It is very true and deep
Posted 10 Years Ago
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I really like this and it speaks truth about time that's for sure, it's realistic and relatable too. Time does seem to go by really fast sometimes.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Makes me think of how people are around the holidays. Like a million things to do but not enough time to do it. Great poem really well written
Posted 11 Years Ago
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You either beat time or time beats you...Bravo
Posted 11 Years Ago
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I like it. Great flow with understandable feelings. Well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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It's simplistic, yet very elaborate. Wonderful job :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on September 23, 2013
Last Updated on September 23, 2013
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