Deep inside

sometimes I sit and think

about every little thing

is there a pattern, some kind of link

why are we here, why do we sing

I wish i could stop

Thinking only eats me away 

skip the brain and to the heart we hop

why can I not seem to keep this darkness at bay

is this world for myself

or do I belong here at all

keep it going or put my life upon the shelf

am I myself or just another little doll

keep me away

or let me stay

Author's Note

My first writing in a while wrote this in about 10 minutes. basically random thoughts. ignore mistakes

Reviews

[Steph K]

I like the ambiguity in this piece, there is longing and wonder and joy and pain. Beautifully penned!

[Rachel]

Great,
a lot of my poems can take days.
This was pretty amazing

[Pastel Nix]

I wish I could write something like that in ten minutes. It's a very nice poem. Good job.

[Tasha]

For your first write in a while I thought it was amazing, I loved the ending about being a doll on a shelf. Excellent work.