Complete Man

A man of complete love

sees not the true cruelty of this world

only the beautiful part

the one that has crystallized and pearled

A man of despair

is blind to the bright rays of sun

just glances at the horrid truth

look right at the damage that has been done

A man of peace

justice, is someone they've never met

let the wrongs that have been done slide

revenge, you will never get

A man of theory

can't see the element of surprise

never goes unexpected

always tactical, but never sudden

A complete man utilizes all

a mixture of heart, mind, mercy, and bronze

looks at a whole instead of a piece

knows how to use both pro's and con's

Author's Note

enjoy, tell me what you think.
I think it might be kind of cool to see what you can add on to this, so I encourage you to leave comments including something of your own creation that'll fit.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Nice job! Love it 100%

[Becky C Strukamp]

I think this is well written and very clear the effects our dispositions in life render our character that it reaches out to others, your structure is wonderful. I really enjoyed this poem. A truthful portrayal of mankinds virtues, strengths and weaknesses and their affects.

[Sarah]

Its amazing. Love it.

[Cory Stonestreet]

awesome poem dude, it is greatly put and is absolutely true as a whole

[justjenn_2u]

INTUITIVE, my first impression and may this evil world never break any spirit of yours. Your words speak honesty therefore I hold onto the belief you are going to stand strong. You have a descriptive writing style that packs no punches. It's raw and honest

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting title. As for the poem...
I love the first stanza, so nice and real.
Love the descriptions of despair in stanza two.
Interesting descriptions of theory... really like that stanza as well.
Love the ending stanza... such a fitting real write. Very nice, enjoyed this a lot.
Your color and words that stand out as a highlight of each stanza showing what the stanza is for, so nicely done.

[NovaeSpes]

WOW this is truly breathtaking uh wow just wow.

[Deandra Dawn]

Very nice, I really don't think anything else needs to be added. Your thoughts are perfect as is.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, Joshua! I'm thoroughly impressed with this poem. It's really good and interesting. I think it's good when someone sees life with a whole understanding instead of just a piece. Like you explained the very last stanza. Sometimes it gets so hard in life to see both the pro's and con's. If someone can do that, then they deserve an award or something! Haha. This piece held my attention throughout the whole time, and had me thinking the whole time too. I tried to decide what category would I be considered. Haha! Well, great job for sure! Keep writing, you're talented! You have a gift, remember that!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very nicely written indeed..a complete and clear message.