convalescence

05/2012 (Blood type B: Installment Twelve)

We the cannibals held captive

will celebrate soon in crimson

rivers. Civilization will crawl 

before corruption. Quenching 

our contagious thirst during 

this crusade of consternation.

Countries will consent to our

contingency and captains will

cower in confusion. Disbelief  

will cease and cognition will

climax terror. Carrion will

continue to captivate. 

Clad in calamity we will cut

through the countless hordes.

Consuming their claret as we

correlate and cultivate with

tenacity and courage. Our

carnage will cascade hope.                              

Author's Note

There is something about C...

Reviews

[writing mojo]

yep this one bites in and never lets go, such placed word usage in ebb bloody retribution of darkness as a believer in divine segregation of being the undead to a living world. The images of this piece invoke a mobbing acceptance, a grave message of revolt instead of torches lit we have fangs blood read... bravo

Ooh you are so beautiful within the quill, deep thoughts, I loved this chapter, as I was drawn to here and feel the bloody brilliance....

[Victoria Elizabeth]

very good!!!!!

[Aidz]

Courageous contemplating created chrysalis

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was really nicely written. I enjoyed reading it. I agree the vocabulary is really good. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Kaylor Mason]

This sings lust, bloodshed and mortal conquest on a grand scale! I felt the blood pump in me--hard--as I read this!

[♥ Kinnixk]

I love the vocab in this chapter. Really well written, nice job! :D

[olla]

I like this very much.. well done..

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Our
carnage will cascade hope.

my favorite line...though it's a very bloody poem in general

[johnnyqueer]

I enjoyed the alliteration in the last stanza. Overall this was a fantastic poem!