convalescence

05/2012 (Blood type B: Installment Twelve)

We the cannibals held captive

will celebrate soon in crimson

rivers. Civilization will crawl 

before corruption. Quenching 

our contagious thirst during 

this crusade of consternation.

Countries will consent to our

contingency and captains will

cower in confusion. Disbelief  

will cease and cognition will

climax terror. Carrion will

continue to captivate. 

Clad in calamity we will cut

through the countless hordes.

Consuming their claret as we

correlate and cultivate with

tenacity and courage. Our

carnage will cascade hope.                              

Author's Note

There is something about C...

Reviews

[writing mojo]

yep this one bites in and never lets go, such placed word usage in ebb bloody retribution of darkness as a believer in divine segregation of being the undead to a living world. The images of this piece invoke a mobbing acceptance, a grave message of revolt instead of torches lit we have fangs blood read... bravo

[Jazique]

Alright, this was definitely an interesting and original piece. For one you definitely had a thing going on with the letter 'c' even though this could never be a tongue twister. As for the piece it self makes me think of our present state in this wold, a world unknown, or even just our possible furture. This could just be me though. Imagery, I love it in general and you defnitely had it going on in your piece; "civilization will crawl before corruption." Anyways well done. Can't wait for you to blow my mind.

[TL Boehm]

formidable wordplay in this one. Well penned

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good ending to the story. I had to do a quick re-read of the outstanding story. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

[Draven]

Brillaint.

[Shep]

Ok not what I expected. Which was good. I like suprises. This was one of those and I enjoyed it.

[Rene Velez]

nice one Josh, vivid imagery, you've been gone for a while, glad to see you back.

[roarke]

A poetic version of all the rhetoric spewed across millennia.
A metal gauntlet fist and sword in one hand, a goblet of claret blood in the other and the next sacrificed lamb of the feast is brought forth.
Nice tight stanzas. Good continuity.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is brilliant and makes me want to think a little harder as to whether I can write a book.

[SUGATA M]

Beautiful application of words starting with 'C'. 'Civilization crawling before corruption' - nothing can be more true than this. Josua your crusade against our 'so called' civilization is actually reflecting your committment to protect the human face from its own vices. Superb......

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Great chapter.
You done a wonderful job on the vocabulary and word structure.
Easy to read :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)