carcinogenic wonderlands

12/2011 (Blood type B: Installment Ten)

Another cold and baneful night sets 

around my detrimental mindset

taste iron crimson raindrops

as they fall from winters sky

 

the darkness is deleterious as  

carcinogenic wonderlands rise

in concord with the moon that 

shows red splashed landscapes

 unrelentingly 

                   

slashing the throats of my rivals

and smearing their coating warmth 

underneath my dry eyes so that I 

too may cry blood

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[EMF]

A stunningly dark and atmospheric write that created a sea of images. Especially of blood tears. This is one of those poem that has used language with such care and precission that the images will stay in the mind throughout the day. Beautifully dark and delerious. Superbly crafted wether read to oneself or read out loud. Great job

[Coyote Poetry]

Great words and artwork/video. I like the place you took me with the poem. I like the feel of darkness and desire of blood. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[BeccaB]

wowi got shivers ^_^ love the way youve writtern this brinning a vast amount of imagry

[Amila Jay]

WOW!!! superb write:)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..

[EMMIE]

wow this is chilling i got goose bumps lol

[Priscilla Sayers]

A dark and blood thirsty write. Nicely done.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like that last stanza... very nice, dark, and gruesome, and a great use of vocabulary.

[Rene Velez]

Vamp-ish indeed...