murder death kill

10/2011 (Blood type B: Installment Five)

"187"

He spoke nervously into his two way

as he walked up to the lifeless body

that lay twisted on the dirt road.

The gore that surrounded her was

illuminated by his vehicle's headlights.

Looking, he could see that her

throat appeared to have been 

ripped out or cut. Blood still

gushed out the fatal wound,

flowing in the dusty tire tracks.

"187"

"I repeat. I gotta 187, white female

out here on old wire road. It's 

pretty bad. Requesting backup.." the

young policeman says as he turns back 

towards his patrol car. Three feet in 

front of him stood a person.

A man. His clothes were torn and 

he was not seemingly shaken by the 

extreme cold. Unshaven and disheveled.

Blood covered mouth.  "Oh my God" was 

all the rookie managed to say while trying 

to raise his gun.

As he attempts to train his sights, he is 

slammed to the ground. Knocking out his breath.

Flailing around, his arms are pushed back by 

the savage man. He feels the killers teeth sinking 

into his throbbing throat. Pain explodes and

claustrophobia. Causing him to pass out.

Awaking, he realizes the psychopath is 

gulping the red, bubbling flow that pours 

from his neck. Struggling in panic, he pushes 

back at the assailant. The attacker screeches.

Grabs the lawman's head and smashes it repeatedly on 

the lime rock. After licking at the stickiness on his 

fingers the deranged man stands up and walks off 

into the trees.

"235 do you copy. Come in 235"

 

Author's Note

I took a different approach to this one. Put more of a story tale style into this fifth installment of the series. Less emotional and more gore. lol

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Wow, this was purely dark and terrorizing. This simple man is calling out for help but instead gets taken down by the killer as well with no hope of his whereabouts being found. In a way, its really sad but in another matter, the description was clarifying what you wanted to point out.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Fricking excellent. Dark, disturbing, delectable.

[Amila Jay]

Wow, I can almost picture this, super write:)

[Thea]

Aw...I got goosebumps while reading this! Haha! Very dark poem...Excellent...♥ the concept... :)))

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Not only your author's note says it but the poem does too... lots of gore, sort of grotesque. Right from the beginning I love how you have written this.
"The gore that surrounded her was
illuminated by his car's headlights."
This is a awesome write, i love it, all of the gore and dark details, and how different you wrote it as a scene like a story... really well written. Love this !

[realmwriter]

Well then I guess he should have shot first and got on the horn later huh?

[patricia]

I could picture it well from your description. I'm not realy into blood and gore, but you wrote it well. Thanks.

[Lily Mae]

Well done :) I felt as though I was there with your great ability to describe the scene:) Dark and full of gore but it made an excellent read...xx

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Wow it's scary!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. A complete tale in so few words. Remind people to check out their area for unknown attack. I like the complete story and the very good ending in this poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote