Luna

Luna

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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10/2011

"
                                                      
                                                  Luna the little white cat...
                                             she terrorizes my house
                                                            s***s like crazy
                                                pisses on the curtains
                                                    runs up and down
                                               the hallways at night
                                                    puts her cold wet
                                                 nose on me while
                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...
                                                  I will love my cat
                                                    because sometimes 
                                                        I do love her
 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

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Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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sorry that should have read..wont let you stroke them but still.. oops! sorry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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well described.. I love cats..especially the nowty ones that wont let you struck them but still think they have a right to plonk themselves on your lap. This was a cheerful pleasant write. Thankyou.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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My cat is the same. Destroying the curtains and always looking for trouble. Thank you for the excellent poem about your cat.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Yeah I have two of them. Want one?

Nice work, brother.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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(shh that's not true I have six) lol.. and I still get angry lol..xx

Very cute and creative I love it and it made me smile on a day that my smiles got sucked out of me lol..xo

Posted 13 Years Ago


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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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