Luna

10/2011

                                                      

                                                  Luna the little white cat...

                                             she terrorizes my house

                                                            s***s like crazy

                                                pisses on the curtains

                                                    runs up and down

                                               the hallways at night

                                                    puts her cold wet

                                                 nose on me while

                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...

                                                  I will love my cat

                                                    because sometimes 

                                                        I do love her

 

Author's Note

True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

Reviews

[Zoe Jay]

Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

[Shalini Dinesh]

cute poem, i love cats too, but i don't have one at home though..... cats are fun to watch.... nice poem

[Eric Cox]

Cats can be little terrors sometimes and cute and cuddly at other times. Cool write.

[EMMIE]

AW HOW CUTE AND SWEET. I HATE CATS! HA HA. BUT I LOVE THIS POEM.

[Judas Hammer]

man, I really like your work. Raw and real. Keep it up

[Rene Velez]

awesome...

[InkSlinger]

I've got two.. one the want's nothing to do with me, except when he wants to eat.. and the other, JUST like you write about.. they must be twins!!

[Audrey Howitt]

Yes they are! They are great for anger management! Great write---

[Desmund Tiny]

My cat is almost the same... Great poem.... I love it..... and the picture..... I'm a cat lover yay...... nyan nyan ^.^

[Nobody.]

yep.
had a puppy like that. almost got rid of her. now she's the best damn dog I've ever had the pleasure of knowing.

good friendships always come with messes.

Cheers!