Luna
A Poem by
joshua deathdealer
10/2011
Luna the little white cat ... she terrorizes my house
s***s like crazy
pisses on the curtains
runs up and down
the hallways at night
puts her cold wet
nose on me while
I'm trying to sleep
-.-
I will not be mean ...
I will love my cat
because sometimes
I do love her
© 2011 joshua deathdealer
Author's Note
True story...cats are good for anger management..xx
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Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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cracking up. I have a 16 year old resident feline who makes me CRAZY.
Posted 12 Years Ago
cracking up. I have a 16 year old resident feline who makes me CRAZY.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I know, right?
Posted 12 Years Ago
I know, right?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
dorkus maximus ;)
atleast you're not behaving like Lenny in Of Mice and Men....yet xx
Posted 12 Years Ago
dorkus maximus ;)
atleast you're not behaving like Lenny in Of Mice and Men....yet xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Aw :) I have a cat and she drives me just about as crazy but I love her to death haha so I can definitely relate to this. Thanks for posting!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Aw :) I have a cat and she drives me just about as crazy but I love her to death haha so I can definitely relate to this. Thanks for posting!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like cats too. Sometimes they seem to not care about anything, and then they jump up in your lap, snuggle about awhile, then fall fast to sleep. Great companions.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like cats too. Sometimes they seem to not care about anything, and then they jump up in your lap, snuggle about awhile, then fall fast to sleep. Great companions.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Its seems like you were mad I'm sorry but yeah i like cats to (:
Posted 12 Years Ago
Its seems like you were mad I'm sorry but yeah i like cats to (:
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This part is cute:
" puts her cold wet
nose on me while
I'm trying to sleep"
Posted 12 Years Ago
This part is cute:
" puts her cold wet
nose on me while
I'm trying to sleep"
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I have 2 cats at home lol I love them to death! This was a sweet poem(:
Posted 13 Years Ago
I have 2 cats at home lol I love them to death! This was a sweet poem(:
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very good, I too have a cat that really ticks me off, as she refuses to poo in her litter box after 9 years
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very good, I too have a cat that really ticks me off, as she refuses to poo in her litter box after 9 years
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hahha I love this! =) Poem with full of life!! Cat's life! XD I've two cats myself and I love them. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Hahha I love this! =) Poem with full of life!! Cat's life! XD I've two cats myself and I love them. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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