the wilted

10/2011

                                     

                                        sadness sweeps my senses, 

                                          leaves shrivel and fall

                                         on the soft breezes,

                                         whispering in my mind.

                                         "save us"  Gaia cries... 

 

Author's Note

written for the "To Touch The Earth" contest. Twenty word prompt from PoppySilver.

Reviews

[Raya Avans]

Well it is interesting.. not just simple.. but delicate? Very well done, beautiful write.

~ rae

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Soft words that expresses beauty!

[Emily B]

save us, beautifully written

[Ruth]

Blooming brilliant! lol
Really like this one hon...everything about it :)
xx

[ivizarx]

^_^ fellow competition... thy rival is poised with great material I see