for our children

for our children

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

09/2011

"
Pull yourselves out of the mirage
that your governments have created
for you to waste your precious life 
chasing vain and materialistic junk
giving them back the money they print

Fall to your knees and pray
it doesn't matter your religion
or nationality, color or creed
the world we have been entrusted
is dying right before our very eyes

We spend so much time drowning
in our own misery instead of helping
the starving and dying souls of our 
worldwide family, I am so ashamed
that I too am unable to escape this blame

Now is the time for us to stand together
in unison and support the few superheroes   
that are fighting a seemingly loosing battle
I implore you...please wake up before
there is nothing left for our children
  

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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This was a great write. Everyone should definitely follow what you are saying in this. I feel bad for the children that are being born into this world now. People really need to start listening, but a lot of people know that they won't. The song that you picked to go with this is really pretty. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brilliant piece. I love the diction in your work, and I love the meaning behind the words. It is indeed time for us to stick together and help sustain a future for our children. Great job!

~Adora

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First off let me start by saying wow. And secondly not many people care about the matter at hand. thank you for writing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen, humanity is slowly slipping into a black hole of despair, well done Josh, great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, extremely touching and heartfelt write:

"We spend so much time drowning
in our own misery instead of helping
the starving and dying souls of our
worldwide family, I am so ashamed
that I too am unable to escape this blame"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerfully written! Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautifully written, and a great message to everyone.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful message and craftmanship in your writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! Someone agrees here! ME!
"Now is the time for us to stand together"
We're all one...A very excellent writing... :)))
♥ it...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: humanity, environmental, peace

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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