destiny of gray

07/2011

                                    of all the faces that
                                   said they loved me
                                 I hate yours the most
                                   I've grabbed a hold of truth
                        that brings familiar shades of gray
                                        it's nothing I can't handle
                                           I've been here before
                              I'm at home in this world of failed love
                                    oh my God it's so horrible
                                 this is how you would have me feel
                            unfortunately for you
                                       I'm already over it 
                                           
 

      

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

In time we become wiser. Love ain't easy to understand. Woman are crazy. They think the same of us. I like the logic of the poem. There is always one woman who will be remembered. I like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Muse]

I love the free flow of this write. No boundries here, well thought out.

[Thea]

Simple but elegant...Keep writing... :)))

[donny ingraham]

powerful feelings written here

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

It is horrible that you would have me feel this way, but nothing I can't handle. I hate the sight of your face more than any other face that has ever deceived me. Fact is though, sad for you............I am over it, I am over you.......well penned!

[Lily Mae]

An intense write..with powerful emotions..xx