destiny of gray

07/2011

                                    of all the faces that
                                   said they loved me
                                 I hate yours the most
                                   I've grabbed a hold of truth
                        that brings familiar shades of gray
                                        it's nothing I can't handle
                                           I've been here before
                              I'm at home in this world of failed love
                                    oh my God it's so horrible
                                 this is how you would have me feel
                            unfortunately for you
                                       I'm already over it 
                                           
 

      

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

In time we become wiser. Love ain't easy to understand. Woman are crazy. They think the same of us. I like the logic of the poem. There is always one woman who will be remembered. I like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[falling_toxic_rain]

Hmm, starting off with hatred, and ending with an "I told you so"
haha i love it, love is probably the most complicated thing in the world...conflicting emotions. Good write.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the ending, very nice write.

[Pebbles]

lol ..... we do like to be remembered , and we do have hearts which become fractured in the process :)

[Spookers]

Well done.

[WatashLegend]

an in your face truthful write with a positive ending after all the painstaking brutality of honesty, well penned.

[Samantha Heaton]

Love is pain...Sometimes we'll just have to deal with tht.
Great work.(:

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice, and to the point.

[Desmund Tiny]

Powerful emotion...I love it........ ^.^

[StarSandwich]

Good flow and quite simple write :) luved it