between you and me

between you and me

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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07/2011

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I can see the unmerciful longings written across your face
as you walk the lengthy distance between you and me
fireworks explodes, adding to the anticipation that hangs
sparklers twirl, complementing your approaching presence 
this love is more than we could have ever been prepared for
these months apart have been so hard on our enduring love
always full of uncertain emotions and stealthy predators
I fight like a superhero while you sleep just to keep you safe
it is times like these that weigh so heavily on our hearts
worries have drilled their way into our once carefree lives
I may find another lover..that you are too old for me..
that I am too young for you..I may grow weary of waiting..
separation always brings forth these warranted questions
normal concerns and anguishes of our momentarily divide   
the long nights alone are slowly eating at us both and
we are never complete unless in each others arms

reaching you, I pull you close to me
quickly embrace me, daylight is coming
kill your fears my dearest, most beloved
let me kiss your lips and caress your hair
permit me to show you the authenticity
of a love that will outlast lifetimes 

 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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Its hard to find good poetry on this sub-genre of romance, It tends to be a bit cliche or bubblegum, but time and again you have proven that you can execute it with the surge of passion and pathos that is necessary to execute it well. That is a skill worth hanging onto.

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Such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. This paints a vibrant picture in my mind of love. Very well written, and executed. :)

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Very well written. The way you describe things allows people to imagine what you are telling them. Excellent as always.

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This poem is very good. :) I love the line "we are never complete unless in each others arms". Your imagery is great and I love the honesty in this poem. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow! And this is so so wonderfully expressed! Such an amazing poem love..this is love in an intense manner....just perfection!
xx

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Really good imagery. Great work, as always. :)

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beautiful

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This is beautiful

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aww i loved this, really great picture, and love, really a beautiful write :) i don't know which line to pick that i love but the ending was great

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great piece of prose, josh.

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beautiful and touching

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Added on July 3, 2011
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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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