age of nebulous

06/2011

the black sun rises in your gray cloudless sky

shining on your God forsaken emptiness

your rivers have dried up and decay has set in

apparitions cling to you as flies to a crumb

some flowing through you like a conduit 

dragging you down to your knees

running after you, I scream your name

but you can't respond through your walls

of massive desperation and iniquities 

the master of darkness pulls your strings

bending you to his every whim, oblivion

blinded by your self inflicted mirage

you stumble on to certain expiration 

I will not follow you in your decadence 

can't you feel the zeal in breathing

I will not promote your deterioration 

can't you feel the radiance within 

I pray for your redemption from this paradox 

Author's Note

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Well written... Has many connotations and fluently flows through the lines...

[Ashli The Amazing]

Great Write. Wonderful Imagery. Very Dark. Just The Way I Like It.

[Spookers]

Always love your poems.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent. Dark, scathing, merciless.

[ScaryTrees]

very nice write
strong imagery and clear intent
well done

[Cassiopia Summers]

Man... you are such a strong writer. Really you are. Fantastic peice here. Great imagery, and pain that you can feel.

[Droll Prole]

This is great! The words you have used perfectly convey the idea and the feeling of this.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent use of language.......I will not follow you into this darkness but I will try to save you.......

[Ruth]

Ooohhhh - great use of wording love!
A powerful dance through so many emotions...surreal and biting!
xx

[Rene Velez]

great wordplay, nice imagery....