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A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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06/2011

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the black sun rises in your gray cloudless sky
shining on your God forsaken emptiness
your rivers have dried up and decay has set in
apparitions cling to you as flies to a crumb
some flowing through you like a conduit 
dragging you down to your knees
running after you, I scream your name
but you can't respond through your walls
of massive desperation and iniquities 
the master of darkness pulls your strings
bending you to his every whim, oblivion
blinded by your self inflicted mirage
you stumble on to certain expiration 
I will not follow you in your decadence 
can't you feel the zeal in breathing
I will not promote your deterioration 
can't you feel the radiance within 
I pray for your redemption from this paradox 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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Well written... Has many connotations and fluently flows through the lines...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great Write. Wonderful Imagery. Very Dark. Just The Way I Like It.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always love your poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. Dark, scathing, merciless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice write
strong imagery and clear intent
well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Man... you are such a strong writer. Really you are. Fantastic peice here. Great imagery, and pain that you can feel.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! The words you have used perfectly convey the idea and the feeling of this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent use of language.......I will not follow you into this darkness but I will try to save you.......

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooohhhh - great use of wording love!
A powerful dance through so many emotions...surreal and biting!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great wordplay, nice imagery....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 28, 2011
Last Updated on August 9, 2011
Tags: dark, horror, death

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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