still

still

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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06/2011

"
yes I still see the world
through mascara tipped eyes
          I still sit silently on the ground
          and contemplate the small things
I still hold firm to epic ideas
such as true love and world peace
          I am still a hopeless romantic 
          forever stuck in this fairy tale
anime still burns my television screen
skinny jeans and etnies still fill my closet
          Even though the majority
          of today's youth has taken our lead
I still don't follow the crowd
silently cutting my own trail
           I still gender bend
           call me what you will
f****t, sissy, freak
I will still stop to smell the flowers  
           I will still jump on my trampoline
           in the pouring rain <3 <3 <3

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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Jump on that trapoline, Joshua. The rain will not dampen spirit such as yours. It's not easy being different, but if you are true to yourself, you will always have inner peace. Lots of empowerment in this introspective write. Just one question...what are "etnies"? I have no clue. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. (: They are a type a shoe.
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Ohhhh....thank you for telling me! :)
joshua deathdealer

11 Years Ago

yw and thank you for your beautiful review.



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This poem is so unique and optimistic. A pleasure to read something that imparts personality and feeling too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfect. I don't see anything here that would ever need improvement, and it seems so honest. There is no other way I would have written this. You have such talent :) The format it's in really adds to the presentation too :)
Wonderfully written piece :)
~Chey

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this poem, very unique. :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww this is awesome, so unique and it shows you don't care about what people think, as long as you're happy :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really feel like you opened your sould for us with this one, and it's great. :) I love getting to know you through poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome write. I really enjoyed it! I thought it was amazing. I loved the message within it...if anyone calls anyone a freak it's cause their jealous. You're awesome so don't let people get you down. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was alright...sure thoughts with resilience...nice touch

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really good...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Off the wall and unexpected!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 23, 2011
Last Updated on August 9, 2011
Tags: emo, scene, love

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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