tryst

05/2011

 I look into your eyes ever so closely as we lay in my bed

  silently removed from the war that rages around us

     breathing in unison the placidity of this moment

      my fair love, this night we are safe from peril

                            

               our litanies are in amplified effect

                           

                we are impervious to their fallacies

                            

  we have hollowed out an early embrace in this wall of time

   a chance for our knowing lips to kiss, a tangible collision

     a way to soothe our aching skin, melting collectively                                                           my fair love, this night we have made for ourselves

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

'a way to soothe our aching skin' ! outstanding...
This poem's rich with expressions and emotions are somehow speakable. Those dramatic words goes beyond 'drawing up' a poem. They picture an image of sensual experience in a very careful beautiful way. Amazing piece.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a very nicely written poem. I liked the emotions within the piece and I liked the expressions as well. I agree with Omar Fendri's review. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Elijah Gleaves]

This was very well written and sensual the last stanza is like a release from all of the pressures of the world that the two lovers live in.

[ब्र&#..]

this is a really powerful piece, absolutely lovely
alltid
-Meja Malina

[Mariah Jane]

This is lovely! I truly think you are very good at this. Do you do much writing in the story genre? I'm sure you'd be good at it... Anyways, this is fabulous!

[Veronica Chandler]

Lovely and moving piece you have written; it is an exquisite tribute to love.

[Alicia Hirshey]

You never fail to get into my favorites.

[Maggie]

Love it!!!!

[London]

very nicely done. loved this

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A way to soothe our aching skin.............Wow! I absolutely love this line. You have penned an amazing piece of love here.