tryst

05/2011

 I look into your eyes ever so closely as we lay in my bed

  silently removed from the war that rages around us

     breathing in unison the placidity of this moment

      my fair love, this night we are safe from peril

                            

               our litanies are in amplified effect

                           

                we are impervious to their fallacies

                            

  we have hollowed out an early embrace in this wall of time

   a chance for our knowing lips to kiss, a tangible collision

     a way to soothe our aching skin, melting collectively                                                           my fair love, this night we have made for ourselves

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

'a way to soothe our aching skin' ! outstanding...
This poem's rich with expressions and emotions are somehow speakable. Those dramatic words goes beyond 'drawing up' a poem. They picture an image of sensual experience in a very careful beautiful way. Amazing piece.

[Spookers]

Awesome work.

[patricia]

Classy! intimate, articulate, tender. Cleveryly composed. Most of all. it touched my soul. Thankyou.

[Aidz]

This is beautiful even though encased in a dark skin... nice write Joshua

[roarke]

ah, youth and love.

[Desmund Tiny]

a very passionate write. I love it!! I love how you expressed the emotions here... I LOVE IT!!! Another FAVORITE!!!

[Amila Jay]

Simply nice:)

[Andrea Vargas]

Oh my !!! Oh my!!! This is so beautiful.. I love the way your words flow with such a simple but powerful vibe. Well written. Such an excellent piece!

[Pratik]

its mesmerizing...." we have hollowed out an early embrace in this wall of time"... wow, that's something so well put forward... we hardly get tome for love with everything that goes around us.. what a way to put that across! mind-blowing joshua!

[BlueDreams]

very sweet write.. great work..

[johnnyqueer]

This is really, really beautiful! I love how romantic and sweet this is, awesome write!