for Anya

for Anya

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

05/2011

"
when I think of you
which is never ceasing 
a flood of emotions run
through the valleys of my heart
my love and responsibilities 
form constant thoughts in my mind
the scars in my demeanor 
is the time lost between us
when I think of you 
I think of us running through
the theme parks, hand in hand
your confidence in me is staggering 
when I think of you
I think of you holding me the whole feature film
and kissing my cheek when sadness arose
you are the princess of my realm
when I think of you 
thoughts of your undying love surface
you love like me, unconditionally 
your person and your beauty flatter me
the joys that explode in my heart
when you dance with me, are heavenly 
the shades of time slow to miracle perfection
it makes me who I am as a man

graced by Gods greatest gift, a soul of an angel

© 2012 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
Written for my daughter Anya Lynne.



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its so nice to see such a dedicated father who is not afraid, never hesitates to show how much he loves his daughter. this is going to mean more and more to her as she grows older. the love you show her is so important, it really will set the stage for the rest of her life. but i can tell she is very lucky to have you in her life. :)

ps. i love the name anya!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beyond Beauty, and so great to have a poem bring a hint of a tear to my eye. One of pure joy and love. Great work man.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A overall lovely, heartfelt write. Your injection of emotion within your words is raw and staggering; so undeniably genuine and beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OK, the tears are welling up now. What an amazing write. I absolutely love the line, "...you love like me, unconditionally..." It hit the nail on the head; the love between a parent and child is a two-way street of unconditional love. This goes in my library.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really great love shown in this and honestly showing a great a warm side to your work my friend very very well penned.
Sorry it takes so long for me to get around to reviews but honestly was more than pleased with this change of pace your a hell of a writer amigo cheers Gonzo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay... you got me all choked up here... My goodness, what a precious girl, a precious poem and a wonderful father. The ability to see such an angel from those moments that if we don't pay close enough attention to can pass us by in an instant.
Great write! You never cease to amaze me Joshua....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AW THIS IS SO SWEET. YOU PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE AND YOU MAKE ME FEEL ALL WARM AND STUFF...I LOVE THIS! THANK YOU FOR SHARING. AND SHE IS A BEAUTY!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omw this is soooooo sweet ! i love this and the poem with the picture is sooo cool... i really want a daughter aswell =]... emotion ran through me while reading it!! very good =]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish my dad was here to do that but anyways good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua, this one - to me - is the very best work you will ever do. Yeah, I'm prejudiced regarding the subject and biased about the heart you displayed, but that's life.

Take care man,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel your adoration for this little cutie! I bet you are her hero, and will always remain to be!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Casket City, FL



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