soon

05/2011

I am so ready to go home

our beautiful approximation

I cannot leave alone

my mind dwells on our reflection

purest sounds of our symphony

play upon the strings of my soul

this span of time holds no bars

or chains on my adoration

it blazes from me as if I were a star

hanging so high above, swept away in bliss

I cherish every moment spent with you

soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you

Author's Note

i <3 sherri deathdealer

Reviews

[JustAlex]

I think its actualy a very lovely peice hun
you can tell its somthing heartfelt and actualy meaningful
unlike others on here that writes purely because their head is so high
and so full of themselves they manages to pick up random words and put
it in a line and call it work? I loved it keep it up

[Aidz]

yup as others have said kewl write

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet sentiment here - well written!

[Rene Velez]

nice write, like the last line reminds me of a U2 song

[Black]

a beautifull piece..
wonder if it is about your daughter,l

[Megan]

So romantic :) and sweet. I loved the last line, it really drew everything together and it was just plan awesome. Great write, and it was wonderful to read! Thanks for posting.

[Jessi Leigh]

Imagine if we could say this beautiful poem to ourselves. From our masculine side to our feminine side and from our feminine to our masculine... We long for the love of another lover, but what about longing and loving the lover within?

[Chris Taylor]

A good poem about your lover being your everything. It represented want, need and a feeling of longing that only a good lover can bring out in you. Good job.

[Moebia]

Beautiful.

[Desmund Tiny]

wow.........so romantic........... I love the second stanza..... nice piece..

[Shep]

Very romantic. Love the poem. Love all your poems.