soon

05/2011

I am so ready to go home

our beautiful approximation

I cannot leave alone

my mind dwells on our reflection

purest sounds of our symphony

play upon the strings of my soul

this span of time holds no bars

or chains on my adoration

it blazes from me as if I were a star

hanging so high above, swept away in bliss

I cherish every moment spent with you

soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you

Author's Note

i <3 sherri deathdealer

Reviews

[JustAlex]

I think its actualy a very lovely peice hun
you can tell its somthing heartfelt and actualy meaningful
unlike others on here that writes purely because their head is so high
and so full of themselves they manages to pick up random words and put
it in a line and call it work? I loved it keep it up

[-Scribe in Style-]

Full of emotion! Very deep and sincere. I feel like I can relate to the words and imagery very well.
Love it.. A very good read.

[.......]

This is a very touching, sincere write. Lovely.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I love the beauty within it. The last line is my favorite. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Abbi]

i really like this. well done (:

[BeccaB]

this is very well writen i love it ^_^
its great and vrery touching when reading it which is showen by the emotive writing you have used

this is a realy good piece and you have done a great jobe ^_^

[Tasha]

"I cherish every moment spent with you
soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you"

This was so amazing, you did a really good job.

~ Ta'Shandra

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"my mind dwells on our reflection
purest sounds of our symphony
play upon the strings of my soul"

That is well written and it has a soft imagery to it especially the way you're putting it. Just sheer emotion shows what we go through and how it will lead to one person in particular.

[CharlesMonroe]

Omg!!!! This is so beautiful! :D I can really relate to this, I love it. It's so sweet, it drips with emotion and love, and the imagery is beautiful. I just love it, amazing write (: