soon

05/2011

I am so ready to go home

our beautiful approximation

I cannot leave alone

my mind dwells on our reflection

purest sounds of our symphony

play upon the strings of my soul

this span of time holds no bars

or chains on my adoration

it blazes from me as if I were a star

hanging so high above, swept away in bliss

I cherish every moment spent with you

soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you

Author's Note

i <3 sherri deathdealer

Reviews

[JustAlex]

I think its actualy a very lovely peice hun
you can tell its somthing heartfelt and actualy meaningful
unlike others on here that writes purely because their head is so high
and so full of themselves they manages to pick up random words and put
it in a line and call it work? I loved it keep it up

[Jazique]

Nice touching creative and short as a journey arrives following the heart and out of time with good descriptions here and there as the "purest sound of our symphony, play upon the strings of my soul" well done.

[donny ingraham]

very touching

[Ruth]

Stunning!
All roads lead to a common centre I feel...and when we have love in our hearts..they sparkle on our journeys :)
xx

[Thea]

"I cherish every moment spent with you"
"all my roads lead to you"
So moving and sincere...♥ it... :)))

[Amila Jay]

A very touching poem indeed:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

The title caught my attention, and sure enough it fits the poem so well, a simple word, with a really nice poem meaning so much to just want to be home with that person. I absolutely loved the last 3 lines. This seems so sad and hopeful.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I feel the emotion blazing within. Powerful, simple, and from the heart. Great write.

[WatashLegend]

wonderful poem, the honesty is the leader and the pen is the follower Batman and Robin have executed their mission

[Kaylor Mason]

All my roads lead to you--that line says it all with grace.

[Chris]

Honest, sincere, and yet this gives away a great sense of vulnerability.

For some reason this played like a song in my head. Not sure if that was your intention.