soon

05/2011

I am so ready to go home

our beautiful approximation

I cannot leave alone

my mind dwells on our reflection

purest sounds of our symphony

play upon the strings of my soul

this span of time holds no bars

or chains on my adoration

it blazes from me as if I were a star

hanging so high above, swept away in bliss

I cherish every moment spent with you

soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you

Author's Note

i <3 sherri deathdealer

Reviews

[JustAlex]

I think its actualy a very lovely peice hun
you can tell its somthing heartfelt and actualy meaningful
unlike others on here that writes purely because their head is so high
and so full of themselves they manages to pick up random words and put
it in a line and call it work? I loved it keep it up

[Spookers]

This is sooo cute.

[olla]

when the heart speaks.. the soul listens..

[Draven]

Very heartfelt. It was a good write, and it was very sweet.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is so sweet!

I love the rhyme scheme too.

This is a fav.

xx

[THE Super Hero]

Very nice. I din it very sweet and heart felt! Well done on your wonderful piece. C:

[M.E.Lyle]

Simply put this poem is a golden stream of emotional expression. So smooth and peaceful and loving. I love this line,
"my mind dwells on our reflection
purest sound of our symphony
play upon the strings of my soul
That's classic.

[patricia]

Great sentiments. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. I especially liked the next to last line. Thanks.

[BlueDreams]

An attention seeking craft ... short and sweet ... Nice flow ... Great work :-)

[EMF]

Wonderful...an absolutley perfect read. Is it any wonder people keep coming back to you?

[Arielle Ann]

this was cute...I loved the gradual lengthening of lines...it seemed like gradual increase in your longing to meet her (that's just my comprehension though)...and the last line said it all though short "all my roads lead to you" :)