taint

taint

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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2006

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embroidery is your means of communication
sophistry is your way at edification 
your veracity is a misrepresentation
rejection to you is manifestation 
veiling your faults in meaninglessness 
your poetics show your indecision
your own impulses have created an addiction
evasion from the truth has become your nightmare
affection turns to desolation after boredom sets in
your disconnection with happiness has always been
you float in a cycle built from the misfortune of your past
yet you wear your beauty and pride like a mask
one day your castle of fabrication will come crumbling down
and this time I wont be there to catch you 
before you hit the ground

goodbye  

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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Wow... I like this very very much! The flow is fabulous... It feels so fast paced and driven yet at the same time flows in a coherent manner. I know so many people who can relate with this poem as well... and I know I can to a certain extent. You are very talented at reaching out to people's souls and understandings. Excellent write.

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Wow... I like this very very much! The flow is fabulous... It feels so fast paced and driven yet at the same time flows in a coherent manner. I know so many people who can relate with this poem as well... and I know I can to a certain extent. You are very talented at reaching out to people's souls and understandings. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this :D
one day your castle of fabrication will come crumbling down
and this time I wont be there to catch you
before you hit the ground
^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Favorited.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like my life over the last few years.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you did a lovely job on this piece. I think this was a really beautiful write. I love the vocabulary you used. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your world of illusion is fading fast and my arms will not be here to catch you the next time you fall...........well penned

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on May 20, 2011
Last Updated on December 13, 2011
Tags: taint, dark, breakup, goodbye, truth, emo, romance, poetry, goth, freedom

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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