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08/2014

For a moment I watched you,

Touching the flowers individually

With the wind caressing your hair

 

All the souls your life touched

No doubt watched with me

Through the glances of my wonder

 

Flashes of recognition played

Across your starry eyes

As I stepped closer into view

 

All the longings of life past

Became present in our embrace

That followed cries of joy

 

This contingency allowed me

To fathom what was happening

And where I really was 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

The Universe will always find a way to push us towards that we seek, our thoughts, whether we want them or not. What a beautiful way of saying "All I ever sought, I've found in you. In your arms, home is". I see my favorite colors intertwining. The wrapping of Pandora creates an enchanting feel. Dreamlike.

[Sophy Freebirds]

The visual imager here strick me the most. The way you' ve decorated it with apt wordsjust enhances its appeal. Yes we will find someone who will change the longings of the past into blissful satisfaction of the present.lovely write. :)

~Sophy

[David Scott]

I loved the movie too!
It is important to understand or at least try to perceive where we are in this cosmos...
Interesting write.

[Kenneth The Poet]

A deep piece of connective tissue, if you understand my meaning.

I see luminous flowers, dancing like blue neon rain, beautiful visuals here.
There shall always be this urge to live in another world, between the space of
love and nothing, lays everything. Fantastic read my friend!

- Elisa

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a beautiful write brother. I enjoyed the feel of it. And the imagery really was amazing as it normally is. I love your writing as I read more of it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jeremy Baker]

A tremendous write, the imagery and wistfulness pull me in with their relentless, gentle insight. Wonderful poetry!