You really painted a wonderful picture in my mind. The flow was amazing as it normally is. I wished I could live in a world as beautiful as you paint in this piece. It would take me away from all the negative things in life. And then happiness would be in my heart. This piece is going into my favorites brother. Loved it. Truly amazing. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you kindly Anne for your review and for your time.
This is so utterly great, and sensitive high, my bestie. So breathtaking Josh... with such an imagery as you can embrace death and dark realms, and give new worlds a place, a name, and sight, I want to be there, with my family. Forevermore, and live in peace. I could smell the flowers, and plants, by your words, the ambrosia was seen. But then the hard truth knocks on our doors, we still have so much work to do here. It's not time yet... sigh.
- Elisa
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10 Years Ago
Thank you. ^^ I hope everything is well dear friend.. By the way this poem for me was one of the mos.. read moreThank you. ^^ I hope everything is well dear friend.. By the way this poem for me was one of the most rewarding. Thank you for asking me to write about the Kingdom. Anywho I am headed to work but I'll IM you over my days off. We'll catch up. Take care. xo
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You are most welcome, yes IM me as soon as you can, have been very busy but all is well... This is o.. read moreYou are most welcome, yes IM me as soon as you can, have been very busy but all is well... This is one of your most special writings ever, I treasure it. Take much care too sweet friend xoxox
Another breathtaking piece from you, Joshua. I seriously admire the way you portray such imagery. So beautiful. So vivid. So exquisite. This poem took me into a journey of words that seem to touch my soul. Very soothing. I really love how you put those colorful ideas together in a single composition. And have I mentioned to you before that I like your writing style? Hahaha. I'm serious. It's very enthralling. It flows smoothly and it never ceases to keep me reading. This one was such a fine work. ^^
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Thrinna. Your review here made my day. (:
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what a change seems to shift the very chemistry and neural networks of the brain instead of round t.. read more what a change seems to shift the very chemistry and neural networks of the brain instead of round the bend.
atonement none needed to patch the already whole heart Go freely on your way
This is very peaceful and it has great imagery, I love the colors you described. I think my favorite visual was "Green barren hills that graced the countryside, bountiful with a surrounding forest" partly because I love being around a forest, so peaceful and beautiful. I enjoyed reading this poem and I think it flows wonderfully.
Great Job
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for stopping by and for your words. I enjoyed writing it.
10 Years Ago
You're welcome, I can see that you enjoyed writing ^^
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