Ah, your poems always make me sad but I still love reading them because they are always inspired by pure and real feelings. Very nostalgic. The picture made my heart clench, even the words! Ok, let's just say that the poem itself touched the whole of me.
"Rewriting my history, my heart"
Gave me thoughts about my past. Moving on is too difficult especially when you've loved a person very much. However, just had to let go and keep the beautiful memories inside a precious jar.
This was great, Joshua! Loved it a lot.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Thrinna for your review and for your positive note. So good to see you back (:
Ah, your poems always make me sad but I still love reading them because they are always inspired by pure and real feelings. Very nostalgic. The picture made my heart clench, even the words! Ok, let's just say that the poem itself touched the whole of me.
"Rewriting my history, my heart"
Gave me thoughts about my past. Moving on is too difficult especially when you've loved a person very much. However, just had to let go and keep the beautiful memories inside a precious jar.
This was great, Joshua! Loved it a lot.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Thrinna for your review and for your positive note. So good to see you back (:
10 Years Ago
You're most welcome. ^^
This one touched me deeply, you know why, and you have posted a perfect picture with your words. This inner connection is never lost, it's holding strong until the right moment... :) There will be a day soon, where all will be out of the shadows, and into the light. Believe me ;) nice piece my bestie, as always, you blow me away.
Beautiful music and poetry. Those kind and sweet memories are never forgotten. I like the questions and the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry and song.
Coyote
"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..