magnetic

magnetic

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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03/2013

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 The reins of what remains of my sanity

    Has slipped from my hands

                    The elements are off

  Up is left, right is down

  Magnetic thoughts pull the worm to

                    The back of my head

 No longer am I chasing mere memories

    I have stepped through the boundaries

                     To dance with the

   Congregation of the dead 



© 2014 joshua deathdealer


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this is how you threaten people, what your horoscope is saying living for 100yrs..

Posted 6 Months Ago


You are so attracted to it, like a magnet, again you have written this with a passion only you can... a future death, described with little words, but in a grand way, for "some" it will be scary. ;)

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riveting effect... suits the sharpness of the poetics

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done Josh!
Great visual, fitting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

10 Years Ago

Thanks. Glad you liked it. (:

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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