a touch of red

a touch of red

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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07/2014

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In my rising I have fell
into a deep cavern

where your blood runs
down the walls of my mind

I step through holes
left behind by the chemicals

coming closer to the red
closer to the unspoken

I can smell the iron
shaking, I touch the membrane

smearing, my mouth waters
remembering the flavor

I can almost taste the wonder

© 2014 joshua deathdealer


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This one is so lovely dark, and it's almost you become one with the one you will eat... the blood will feed you, but for now, it seems, you're just smelling it dreaming of it... hence to your last words....
I love your work goes, from light to dark... it's perfect.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This one is so lovely dark, and it's almost you become one with the one you will eat... the blood will feed you, but for now, it seems, you're just smelling it dreaming of it... hence to your last words....
I love your work goes, from light to dark... it's perfect.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baked up red like wonder bread, blood of a mind pouring down the walls, eerie with a touch of reverence kind of wonderful. nice work ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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