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Powerful Josh...
I know you've been there, and I've seen you growing, and turning to the light,
as through the years, I've read you, watched you, talked with you, and there are times, it strongly is turning back, as that circle, but inside of you rests a powerful strong person, that simply shall battle with both... you will forever, it's you.. and it's beautiful :D
I'm in fond of your last line, it shows, how steady you are, without getting overwhelmed by one side...
Clever, and on point dear one. You balance well.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso l.. read moreThank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso la mia più vera di amici. xx
10 Years Ago
Non hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesor.. read moreNon hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesoro, é parliamo domanin di più ... xx Divertiti con il filmo!! Sei benvenuto sempre....
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Powerful Josh...
I know you've been there, and I've seen you growing, and turning to the light,
as through the years, I've read you, watched you, talked with you, and there are times, it strongly is turning back, as that circle, but inside of you rests a powerful strong person, that simply shall battle with both... you will forever, it's you.. and it's beautiful :D
I'm in fond of your last line, it shows, how steady you are, without getting overwhelmed by one side...
Clever, and on point dear one. You balance well.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso l.. read moreThank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso la mia più vera di amici. xx
10 Years Ago
Non hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesor.. read moreNon hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesoro, é parliamo domanin di più ... xx Divertiti con il filmo!! Sei benvenuto sempre....
I really loved this poem. You always have a good flow to all your poems. And the last line stuck out to me the most. If you were a superhuman that would be pretty cool. Thank you for sharing yet another beautiful piece.
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