salute

salute

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

05/2013

"
I will turn my back
even it breaks my neck
your resolve is weak
             disfigure me 
guide me down the path
I have chosen to be my
own self destruction

I will hide my face
away from who I am
             suppose to be
watch me disappear 
into the dead, black yonder 
like a balloon floating high 
amongst the billowing, toxic clouds 
of our magnificent waste

© 2014 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
"Ave, Imperator, morituri te salutant"

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Really cute poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the first stanza because it shows just how strong you are. And even if you are destroying yourself you will try to be strong. I am rambling now, but I love this. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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