overdose
A Poem by
joshua deathdealer
03/2013
designer drugs disarray my composition
mascara laced tears
line my face
I ride an astral
rollercoaster
this is my meridian
my way to blot out
the disgust
this dismal taste
this gloaming
of my spirit
static thoughts
spill from my ears
yielding to the
luminous death
at hand
© 2014 joshua deathdealer
Author's Note
photo: afemera.deviantart.com
Reviews
Goodw work. The last stanza was amazing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Looks like you just continue to progress! Well done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Looks like you just continue to progress! Well done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The virtue of vice
is
The vice of virtue.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The virtue of vice
is
The vice of virtue.
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
We all travel with vice or viceless, but we all do travel...love to you hon, always good to read you x
Posted 10 Years Ago
We all travel with vice or viceless, but we all do travel...love to you hon, always good to read you x
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The tunnel isn't exactly full of white light, now is it?
Posted 10 Years Ago
The tunnel isn't exactly full of white light, now is it?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
No it isn't Kenneth. Thanks for connecting.
This speaks to me as the dark tunnel spins its web about my senses and I sink my teeth into its beauty.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This speaks to me as the dark tunnel spins its web about my senses and I sink my teeth into its beauty.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
How wonderfully dark and brooding! Added to my list! :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
How wonderfully dark and brooding! Added to my list! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Affecting and rather disturbing...we all yeild to some kind of quick fix band aid to soothe our pain, this one is too final. Nicely pen'd joshua.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Affecting and rather disturbing...we all yeild to some kind of quick fix band aid to soothe our pain, this one is too final. Nicely pen'd joshua.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 19, 2014
Last Updated on January 19, 2014
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death ,
dark ,
drugs
Author
joshua deathdealer Casket City, FL
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