overdose

overdose

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

03/2013

"
designer drugs disarray 
my composition

mascara laced tears
line my face

I ride an astral
rollercoaster

this is my meridian 

my way to blot out
the disgust

this dismal taste

this gloaming 
of my spirit

static thoughts
spill from my ears

yielding to the
luminous death
at hand

© 2014 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
photo: afemera.deviantart.com

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Goodw work. The last stanza was amazing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Looks like you just continue to progress! Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The virtue of vice
is
The vice of virtue.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

We all travel with vice or viceless, but we all do travel...love to you hon, always good to read you x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The tunnel isn't exactly full of white light, now is it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

10 Years Ago

No it isn't Kenneth. Thanks for connecting.
This speaks to me as the dark tunnel spins its web about my senses and I sink my teeth into its beauty.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How wonderfully dark and brooding! Added to my list! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Affecting and rather disturbing...we all yeild to some kind of quick fix band aid to soothe our pain, this one is too final. Nicely pen'd joshua.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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