space junk

03/2013

as in love with

you as I am

I feel so hollow

with nothing left 

to say

as eternal as we

were supposed to be

all my hope has

dried up and

flaked away

burning up in this

dark, unforgiving

sky

I'm fading fast

like shooting stars

flying by

speeding towards

nothingness

holding out for

oblivion 

Reviews

[Frontier]

Woaah this is bleak...I especially like the first stanza, you can be so in love with someone but sometimes it feels like nothing because, maybe the numbness doesn't subside, and also you have nothing to say because all the feelings leave you confused, speechless.

Oh my friend, this is another feeling I read of you... the silent moments, are always there, but they must be seen by others, if not, there is a fading away moment, as here... (I will not let you ever fade away though)...

It's emotional, empty, and somehow a balanced writing of you. The title, wow, with that one, you could pick it up literally, but also it's about being addicted to space, (and thus nothingness)... thought provoking and good... You connect another time and space with this one :) well written sweet friend.

- Elisa