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04/2013

Give way for prudence

Shining through this wall

Dividing the equator

Parallel the parameters

Of my soul

Think mathematical equation

A brand new horizon

Reaching out to get me

To save me

From God knows what

From if I go any further

I may never come back

Reviews

Wow, the title already drawed me in, to read this, it's just a scary title somehow, like there is no heartbeat anymore... then your poem, actually says, such a math flat lined horizonal wisdom, with meaning to an afterlife or being still here, this is great poetry, and so touching... knowing parallel parameters is such a contradiction, and that is headed straight as an opposite to each other ... as the parallel of the universe also, gives me rich visions, of how deep you went with this one. Stunning landscapes of the here, and there... ;) my dear friend, excellently done.

- Elisa

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Joshua, you have definitely grown in your writing. It's changed a but, I feel your words are stronger with more meaning. Very nicely put, brought tears to my eyes but that's easily done these days. Beautiful Josh

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you dear. Life has a way of pulling it out of me. And as life changes, so does my work I suppose. Thanks for stopping by. Its good to see you back.

[KimLove "The Beautiful Butterfly"]

It's good to be back....xo

[ashesonfire]

The title was definitely catching! And the poem did not disappoint :D Well written and definitely interesting.

[Kenneth The Poet]

I can't come even close to this

[Draven]

Fantastic as always. Interesting and well written.