Ursa Minor

08/2013

the brightest of lights

propel me forward

in its radiance

holding me

in its warmth

barriers break

to its luminescence 

shining through

my eyes

its brilliance 

pushing through

my fingertips

speechless

I am ablaze

fully awake

to what's ahead

the dark never was

I know now why

the sky has fallen

why the dead rise

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Aesthetically this shines... I absolutely love the way you bring the light into the dark.

The effervescent quality of your writing is incomparable.

This is Top notch, dear Joshua!~xoxo~:)

Once you have seen the other side, you can write like this sweet friend... I know it by your words, your depth in this one, the feeling, the emotion... you do art with words, in a level almost no one can...

Very special, and touching.
- Elisa

[Hayley]

I love your writing style. It's simplistic yet says so much. This one in particular has a brilliant ending.