us as one

05/2013

still your outline burns

starlit, I travel the

mindscape, back to you

still you make me feel small

my heart breaks

to your movements

to the way your hair

falls in your face

I memorized

the scars etched

I traced

the veins cut

the blood mixed

completing us as one

I followed your aura 

as we slept

hidden from the morning

as ghost, we lay

Reviews

I felt this one, you are the poet my dear friend....
What you've written is purity... nothing else.

It says to me you're facing and walking the darker realms, but they are nice
as we know aren't they? (that addictive part)...

I don't need to repeat anything here, for it stands powerful on it's own...
you're the poet who let us face reality, and I'm grateful you do.

There is nothing more beautiful than a soul who "is".

Thank you dearest friend. Just real, honest poetry here.

- Elisa

[Lilly]

From start to finish I was caught up in this. Beautifully written

"my heart breaks
to your movements" - I love the whole piece but these lines in particular stood out to me.

Great poem here

[Draven]

I deify no one, but your work has a tendency to leave me searching the sky. You are such an inspiration, and a guide on my journey as a writer.

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you. It is reviews such as yours that keep me motivated to post. It's been a while and I hope you're doing well. Take care and thx for stopping by.

[Muse]

Your words match the imagery of the pic perfectly. A blur of emotions that make the reader go "oh yeah" I've felt that, I've been there. Kind of nostalgic, but that's why I like it!

[Neon]

I loved this one ..

I memorized
the scars etched

I traced
the veins cut

the blood mixed
completing us as one

Very nice piece, it's an unique. I love the title. Your a very great artist.

[Joiedevivre]

ouch! this cuts right to the core of my heart!:
"starlit, I travel the
mindscape, back to you

still you make me feel small"

beautiful!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work, man. As always, you write well.

[Lost in Wonderland]

"my heart breaks
to your movements

to the way your hair
falls in your face"

This was a hauntingly lovely poem. I adored ever line!
God bless
-Mickey