better yet

04/2013

I give up

turning away from your back

I face a bleak horizon

relishing the inclement 

of this black event

I present myself to failure

the winner of the day

the king, decorated in the bones

of what is left of us

drenched in the stench

of who we once were

I am ready to fade

to close my eyes

so that I may become invisible

formless to your touch

unobstructed by the

beating of your heart 

Reviews

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

A great write of pain spoken from a incredible poet.
My friend its been far to long since I have read your words and much like wine they only grow better with time.
Still I believe you to be one of the best dark poets out there or at least my favorite to read.

Great work on this cheers and stay crazy
Gonzo

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you sir!! Much obliged.

[thespaceinmybed]

I like this a lot. It feels relaxed and effortless, but very potent. I especially like how captivating the last line is.

[joshua deathdealer]

thank you very much