lost to me

12/2012

we really done it this time

thrown dirt on top of this coffin

known as our love

if there ever was a end, this is it

like bullets tearing through tender hearts

its here whether we want it or not

blood soaked dreams

followed closely by diabolical nightmares

have become my sober reality 

I can't even feel the cold

due to an uncontrolled inferno

that incinerates the reminisce of my soul

You are lost to me

my eyes burn from searching

the holes in my sight

promises fall like rain

breaking on the concrete I lay

as the warmth is vacuumed away

vented out into a real world

a place I'd forgotten

a place where the curtains show

what is coming

a place draped in the horror of 

I can't find you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Stevo The POE-t]

When reading this piece it almost feels like your the one writing it... It's packed with sadness and emotion all the way around.. I really enjoyed reading this. As I write a lot about the pain of losing someone you really care for... A few days ago I wrote a new poem with the same line in it as your "Blood soaked dreams" The person writing this has went through great tragedy to have wrote something like this... Now I feel like grabbing my pen and letting it bleed... Thanks for this share man... Great job

[Sami Khalil]

A very touching and painful write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[lei]

very painful but a good write

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow the last 2 lines really got me Ive wrote many times of this heartache ... I really liked this and it makes me want to write some more today

[Bliss]

Painful and very moving poem, you certainly painted emotion with your words!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an amazing write. I could feel the pain within the poem. It's hard to get picked back up when you have lost your way. I have learned that the hard way. Feeling so broken...and alone. Lost and not being able to get the help you need until late. I did just love this. Everything about it. I missed you're writing my love. I'm glad that you're back. Thanks for sharing.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I can certainly feel the pain in this write, Joshua... it's more than most could bear....
especially when one has lost the way.

Sadly the end of this love seems inevitable...
Well penned!... welcome back!~xoxo~