above the sun

above the sun

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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07/2012

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                                               High above this charade of lies 
                                A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets

                                               Here the Creator's adoration reaches
                               Past the limbo that captives us

                               To where who we were meant to be resides

                               A place untouched by the atramentous acroamatics 
                               Of many centuries of self generated cycles

                                              Gently nudging, He is trying to awake the willing

                                              Those who haven't forgotten
      
                                              That
        
                                              Angels fly above the sun

© 2012 joshua deathdealer


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You have not only used your brush to paint in my mind this morning you have expanded my vocabulary with exellent and perfect word choice. I like that it is not forced as I often see with unusual words. The fact that those particular choices are the only words that aptly describe your message even more intrigiung and display a depth of mind that is fascinating. Thank You for the read request. Always fullfilling reading your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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last line is a killer Joshua

Posted 12 Years Ago


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eglantine

12 Years Ago

agreed
joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thanks guys.
Very nice indeed!! super :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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We're around. "A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets." Well spoken.

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"the Creator's adoration.. " I love this concept.. we often forget that.. "gently nudging" geeze.. I think he uses a sledge hammer on me.. is that a gentle nudge..?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

lol That's the way I've felt for a couple of months. Like he is trying to wake me up using everythin.. read more
Dear joshua deathdealer,

This poem reminds me of the book of Ecclesiastes when King Solomon talked about the vanity of life without God also known as vanity "under the sun." I like the title as it makes me think of the ultimate conclusion that God surpasses all, that the supernatural is above us.

This is my favorite lines,

" Gently nudging, He is trying to awaken the willing
Those who haven't forgotten
That
Angels fly above the sun"

Cause it empowers the beauty of faith and divinity. Nicely written. Well, that's my view of the poem, anyways.

Thanks for sharing!

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless


Posted 12 Years Ago


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joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much LL. God bless you. xx
This was a really interesting poem in my opinion. I had to read it a couple times to get a sure feel for it. Honestly I thought it was wonderful. The song is extremy good too(; Very nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thank you kindly.
Great poem! I like the last few lines in particular as well as the flow of words in it. Good work!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thank you.
Good tones aloud...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Chris

12 Years Ago

they really, really do
Chris

12 Years Ago

I came back to relisten
joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Chris.
Oh wow! This is Beautiful!...just what I needed to read for my soul to feel at peace from the turmoil of the day..

"Gently nudging, He is trying to awaken the willing
Those who haven't forgotten
That
Angels fly above the sun"~ Well penned!




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow this is really inspiring and beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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joshua deathdealer

12 Years Ago

Thx (:
Colleen a Bean

12 Years Ago

Welcome lol

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