above the sun

07/2012

                                               High above this charade of lies 

                                A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets

                                               Here the Creator's adoration reaches

                               Past the limbo that captives us

                               To where who we were meant to be resides

                               A place untouched by the atramentous acroamatics 

                               Of many centuries of self generated cycles

                                              Gently nudging, He is trying to awake the willing

                                              Those who haven't forgotten

      

                                              That

        

                                              Angels fly above the sun

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rusty]

You have not only used your brush to paint in my mind this morning you have expanded my vocabulary with exellent and perfect word choice. I like that it is not forced as I often see with unusual words. The fact that those particular choices are the only words that aptly describe your message even more intrigiung and display a depth of mind that is fascinating. Thank You for the read request. Always fullfilling reading your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the story in the poem. Mystery and myth is good to have in a poem. I like the thoughts and visions create by the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

Thoughtful words here. They actually provoke vast sentiments within. Well done.

[Layla J Omorose]

great poem. beautiful imagery and reflection with in the poem. to be honest there are some words im going to have to google later but good work

[Rhea752]

original and striking. well done!!!! :)

Such a clear and beautiful message here my friend. I hope some will pick that up. Amazing ending ;)

E.L. xo

[writing mojo]

Angel residence, is for sure revealing in this piece, weather fallen on pages or speaking through your sun covered ink...good stuff

[SUGATA M]

Different from your other poems, I like the last line particularly.

[Destinyxi]

I like the formatting of this poem, original. Great write!

[Lily Mae]

Whenever I read you I know I'm in for a treat. But wow Josh.. this has a smile on my face and is just well balanced, soft yet powerful if that makes sense.. You've penned the truth with this so well..as you always do :) xo

[joshua deathdealer]

(: xo